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    Can you tell me what you think and how I could improve? I know its probably not clear but I was nervous recording this as I tend to read out my poems really fast. https://soundcloud.com/kwekue-ghana/love-lost
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    Very nice, a good idea to help you add some new words at the end of sentences is to use imperfect rhyme to suggest a broken relationship/heart.
 
 
 
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