Can you tell me what you think and how I could improve? I know its probably not clear but I was nervous recording this as I tend to read out my poems really fast. https://soundcloud.com/kwekue-ghana/love-lost
I done a really short spoken word poem Watch
- Thread Starter
- 31-07-2016 18:24
- 31-07-2016 18:28
Very nice, a good idea to help you add some new words at the end of sentences is to use imperfect rhyme to suggest a broken relationship/heart.