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    again

    based on a certain person who hurt me and how much they hurt me

    look again
    smile again
    fed up of being his again
    just want to be yours
    not again

    fun to be with again
    smile again
    feel again
    then realise not this time
    not again

    black again
    flirt again
    eyes again
    want to be apart
    not again

    realising again
    hurt again
    forgiven again
    but then again
    it's too late

    smile again
    cry again
    then again
    only now are you
    innocent again
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    That was tedious, no emotion comes through.
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    (Original post by thegreatprocrastinator)
    That was tedious, no emotion comes through.
    I disagree. I liked it, theres a good rhythm to it. Also I like the simplicity of it, even though the emotions behind are probs mixed and many. Not all poems have to be laiden with heavy language :rolleyes:
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    I really liked that, true yet again for me

    LOL, that's a bit... er.. ****.
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    I like it. Simple, which is good.
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    (Original post by Caffine)
    Not all poems have to be laiden with heavy language :rolleyes:

    I never stated that poems must have heavy language. You just assumed.
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    (Original post by thegreatprocrastinator)
    I never stated that poems must have heavy language. You just assumed.
    I wasn't aiming it at you was just saying
 
 
 
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