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    hi. i have an essay to do on the following queston, "analyse the responsiveness of the legal system in achieving justice for asylum seekers and refugees"
    i have to discuss the legal and non legal mechanisms.
    what are these?
    i am completely lost
    if someone has any other extra tips, that would be great
    please, please, please!
    can someone pls help me asap?
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    (Original post by roserox)
    hi. i have an essay to do on the following queston, "analyse the responsiveness of the legal system in achieving justice for asylum seekers and refugees"
    i have to discuss the legal and non legal mechanisms.
    what are these?
    i am completely lost
    if someone has any other extra tips, that would be great
    please, please, please!
    can someone pls help me asap?
    thankyou
    Legally, technically you can only apply for asylum/refugee status in the first safe country you arrive in. After that you're a migrant.

    Also, define what you mean as "justice", as that can be interpreted in different ways depending on the person. Then argue from that point.

    Hope that helps
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    hey thankyou so much!!
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    (Original post by roserox)
    hey thankyou so much!!

    No problem

    Just suggestions. I'd check the legal detail though just in case there are small details that can impact on applying for asylum etc

    Is it for A level or uni etc?
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    its for school
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    (Original post by roserox)
    its for school
    Ah okay cool!

    Still look at the legality of asylum claims vs maybe our moral obligations?

    And as said define what you under and as justice for them.

    I can always check stuff over if you want.
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    this essay is due tomorrow and i havent even started yet. i want to structure my paragraphs and know what im going to talk about in each paragraph. thats where im lost at.
    any suggestions?
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    (Original post by roserox)
    this essay is due tomorrow and i havent even started yet. i want to structure my paragraphs and know what im going to talk about in each paragraph. thats where im lost at.
    any suggestions?
    Leave the intro till last

    think of 3 points you want to make - one or two long paragraphs each

    write the limitations of your points, or counterpoints to them

    Conclusion.

    Go back and write the intro basically just outlining what you've just written
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    it says that i must talk about legal and non legal measures and the different perspectives on the issue.
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    (Original post by roserox)
    this essay is due tomorrow and i havent even started yet. i want to structure my paragraphs and know what im going to talk about in each paragraph. thats where im lost at.
    any suggestions?

    Ah okay!

    Hmmm

    P1: introduce the topic. I'd say focus on rn current refugee crisis and how it's been caused. I.e - Isis and the problems that's caused.

    P2: start to discuss what the law is in regards to refugees legally and maybe what our moral obligation is. Compare his to what has act silly happened. Eg - What Germany has done legally and morally etc. I'd say also discuss the geolocation Italy and Greece. Plus, if the actions of Turkey have done esp since the attempted coup.

    P3: is this justice? If so why or why not?

    P4: conclude

    Obviously, more than 4 paragraphs would be needed but I think that's and okay scripture.
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    is the refugee and humanitarian program a legal mechanism?
    im so confused with the mechanisms
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    i was planning on focusing more on boat arrivals and the controversy there....
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    (Original post by roserox)
    i was planning on focusing more on boat arrivals and the controversy there....
    That's fine too! Not to sure about the Legal mechanisms ins and outs though.
 
 
 
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