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    Hi all,

    This is a piece of creative writing I wrote a while ago. It's about a girl whose obsession with her appearance leads to her own downfall. Please have a read and give me your honest opinion - I'd really appreciate it.

    Cheers!
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    Great narrative! 8.5/10
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    (Original post by t s)
    Great narrative! 8.5/10
    Thanks ^.^
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    I rate it 10/10
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    Oo, a haunting, profound story there! 9/10
 
 
 
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