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    I believe this to be a very important part of your personal statement, but I don't really know how to go about writing it. This is what I have got.

    For a substantial amount of time, I have been engrossed by the immense power that money has over the world and even more interested in what is behind the financial world’s ‘front cover’.
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    You won't be able to use that opening sentence; it will be flagged up by UCAS' anti-plagiarism software (even if you remove it from your post). Don't post any part of your personal statement on public forums.
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    (Original post by Snufkin)
    You won't be able to use that opening sentence; it will be flagged up by UCAS' anti-plagiarism software (even if you remove it from your post). Don't post any part of your personal statement on public forums.
    Thanks, I will keep that it mind now. lol.
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    Write the rest of the PS first, that will help
 
 
 
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