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    How can i link the first 3 paragraphs to Enoch Powell not having much of an impact on immigration ???

    Paragraph 1 - immigration in the 1950's and 60's. And the issues such as housing, employment and culture.

    Paragraph 2 - What the government did about it in the 1960's (laws). Riots

    Paragraph 3 - Enoch Powell 'rivers of blood' speech.

    paragraph 4 - conclusion
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    What is the question and what is your point, you need to be more clear than Enoch Powell didnt impact immigration.

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    (Original post by BobBobson)
    What is the question and what is your point, you need to be more clear than Enoch Powell didnt impact immigration.

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    My question is:
    "Explain the impact of Enoch Powell on immigration in the 1950s -1960s"

    Paragraph 1 - I describe the relationship between British people and immigrants in the 50s and 60s.

    Paragraph 2 - I explain about the rioting and what the government done e.g 'commonwealth immigration act'

    Paragraph 3 - I explain about and use quotes from the rivers of blood speech by Enoch Powell. I then explain what happens after his speech. E.g he gets sacked but receives popular support from white working class people.

    Paragraph 4 - overall I believe that Enoch Powell did not have much of an impact on immigration because .... He only highlighted the issues cause they were already there and he could not t actively do anything about them anyway. At the time of his speech his party wasn't even in government .......
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    Maybe focus on what he did overall rather than just his speech?
 
 
 
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