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    there is one paragraph on my personal statement, that basically says that graphs are my favourite topic in maths, and i love that there are so many concepts involved (gradient, length, turning points, area, etc.)

    My personal statement adviser comments on this saying "Where is the maths here?"

    is it me or does that sound stupid? is his comment justified?
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    (Original post by shahs341)
    there is one paragraph on my personal statement, that basically says that graphs are my favourite topic in maths, and i love that there are so many concepts involved (gradient, length, turning points, area, etc.)

    My personal statement adviser comments on this saying "Where is the maths here?"

    is it me or does that sound stupid? is his comment justified?
    "Graphs" isn't exactly a topic when referring to x-y-z axis and functions. Unless you're referring to Decision mathematics, which by the looks of it, you aren't.
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    (Original post by shahs341)
    there is one paragraph on my personal statement, that basically says that graphs are my favourite topic in maths, and i love that there are so many concepts involved (gradient, length, turning points, area, etc.)

    My personal statement adviser comments on this saying "Where is the maths here?"

    is it me or does that sound stupid? is his comment justified?
    It'd be better stated as: "functions and their graphs are my favourite topic/area of maths and I love that there are so many..."
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    (Original post by shahs341)
    there is one paragraph on my personal statement, that basically says that graphs are my favourite topic in maths, and i love that there are so many concepts involved (gradient, length, turning points, area, etc.)

    My personal statement adviser comments on this saying "Where is the maths here?"

    is it me or does that sound stupid? is his comment justified?
    i did my own personal statement, never let any teachers read it because when I did, they all had different opinions about it. Made my own one, sent it on ucas and I just did fine, got all offers from my uni and picked the one i wanted to go to.
 
 
 
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