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    I've finished my 3rd draft of my personal statement, and I wanted someone to check it. I just recently found out though, that I have a limit of 4000 characters, and 47 lines, so I'll also need to crop it down after this draft, as I'm at 4700+ characters, and 52 lines. I also think I may have spoken about some topics too much, or not expanded enough on some topics, but we haven't really received much help on that yet within school, and I know that it needs to be finished soon, which is why I wanted to ask on here for help.


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    Take this down!!!!
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    Never put your statement online in case others plagiarize it.
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    (Original post by LegendLunsi)
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    Dont post your PS here, others will plagiarise
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    That isn't the issue ^

    The UCAS plagiarism checkers will pick this up, and you have no proof it was yours. You may not be able to use this now.
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    Umm, how do I take it down?
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    You will need to rewrite this - it will have been picked up by Google. There's nothing that we can do, I'm afraid.
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    Well, thank you for telling me guys, I was about to return to school too. Hopefully I didn't mess anything up too badly, I guess.
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    Should I simply just create a new discussion instead asking what I can possibly put into mine?
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    Would it have already been picked up?
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    (Original post by LegendLunsi)
    Would it have already been picked up?
    Possibly yes. You're probably going to have to do another one
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    It might be time for TSR to put up that banner telling people to not post their statements
 
 
 
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