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    Hi guys, i am currently trying to write a personal statement for uni. This is what i have so far, please could you take a read and any advice would be appreciated.

    (DO NOT POST YOUR PERSONAL STATEMENT ON TSR)
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    Don't post your PS publicly online.
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    dellete this you fool, someone s going to copy it
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    Quick delete itttt
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    Only send your statement privately to people you trust (preferably those who aren't applying for your subject in your year)
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    You are going to have to start again. There's a cache of this page and it might get picked up for plagiarism now.
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    they are VERY right - please delete it, not because we don't want to see it but the fact that other people might use this and send it in before you, this means under UCAS regulations, YOU will be the one 'cheating'.
    Also, do not write anything less than the number 10 as digits
    The best piece of advice would be to get it PRINTED, then checked by you're economics teachers... then a maths teacher... then an English teacher.... and finally your UCAS advisor..... before being triple checked by your head of year
    Hope it helped
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    Delete this now u are gonna get caught by plagiarism software.
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    You are better of sending this to a trusted PS Reviewer don't post it publicly.
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    You are technically giving your place away if you put on the internet. Take it down. People will look at yours and add more stuff to be different from you
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    (Original post by samendrag)
    Quick delete itttt
    done - thanks for tagging me.
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    (Original post by Jai Kumar)
    Hi guys, i am currently trying to write a personal statement for uni. This is what i have so far, please could you take a read and any advice would be appreciated.

    (DO NOT POST YOUR PERSONAL STATEMENT ON TSR)
    I have deleted your PS. Never post your PS in a public online forum!

    You will need to rewrite it from scratch due to UCAS's anti-plagiarism software and procedures.
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    (Original post by jneill)
    I have deleted your PS. Never post your PS in a public online forum!

    You will need to rewrite it from scratch due to UCAS's anti-plagiarism software and procedures.
    Hi, thanks for deleting the post. I understand that what i did was stupid, i was just hoping to get a fresh perspective on my PS. Please could someone help me to trt and fix this problem soon, I spent alot of time on my PS and don't want to be changing much
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    (Original post by Jai Kumar)
    Hi, thanks for deleting the post. I understand that what i did was stupid, i was just hoping to get a fresh perspective on my PS. Please could someone help me to trt and fix this problem soon, I spent alot of time on my PS and don't want to be changing much
    The only way to fix the problem is to rewrite your PS. You can use the same themes and structure but you will have to use mostly different words...

    https://www.ucas.com/ucas/undergradu...and-similarity
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    (Original post by jneill)
    I have deleted your PS. Never post your PS in a public online forum!

    You will need to rewrite it from scratch due to UCAS's anti-plagiarism software and procedures.
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    delet this
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    (Original post by Paranoid_Glitch)
    You are better of sending this to a trusted PS Reviewer don't post it publicly.
    Who are trusted PS Reviewers I could send mine to?
 
 
 
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