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    I have nothing for inspiration,
    save a weeping soul.

    I have everything in vanity,
    save a begging bowl.
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    Im not a kardashian.
    Im am very bold.

    Im not narcissistic.
    But inside im cold.
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    Forhead in my mouth
    i like bottles

    chicken on the ground
    some one throttles
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    (Original post by YouHaveProblems)
    Forhead in my mouth
    i like bottles

    chicken on the ground
    some one throttles
    Im seeing this in a interesting way
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    People go and people come,
    I remember when we were one.

    People come and people go,
    You are someone I use to know.



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    Debit cards,
    I swipe that.

    The weather,
    I check that.
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    You said you will never leave,
    Now you've left me to grieve.

    You said we would be together,
    But now you're up above the nether.





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    I can't sleep.
    I can't sleep.

    I can't sleep.
    I can't sleep.
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    I'm writing this whilst sat on the toilet
    Having a massive poo.

    My stomach hurts. Regret having that maccies
    Cos now I'm stuck on the loo
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    Time is money,
    So do not waste it.

    If you get that chance,
    You best take it.


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    Ice cream trucks, I chase that.
    2 shoes, I lace that.

    glasses jacket-shirt man, I call me a winner.
    After I win, I eat my dinner
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    I hope to inspire,
    The one who I made respire.

    I hope to enlight,
    The one who made my days bright


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    Thank you,
    Goodbye.

    I need to poo,
    out this delicious pie.
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    (Original post by AdeptDz)
    I hope to inspire,
    The one who I made respire.

    I hope to enlight,
    The one who made my days bright


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    This was really rubbish
    Everyone Respires

    Yo mammas fat
    with all them spare tyres
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    It's time to let you be,
    Spread your wings as you are free.

    I dreaded this day but knew it would come.
    Atleast now I know you weren't the one.

    Oh how I wished it would be you,
    How I wished we were true.

    If only you knew,
    My love for you.

    Everything comes to an end.
    Time is limited


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    (Original post by AdeptDz)
    It's time to let you be,
    Spread your wings as you are free.

    I dreaded this day but knew it would come.
    Atleast now I know you weren't the one.

    Oh how I wished it would be you,
    How I wished we were true.

    If only you knew,
    My love for you.

    Everything comes to an end.
    Time is limited


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    This is far more than
    2 stanzas, 4 lines.

    I think you should reevaluate
    And make better use of your time.
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    (Original post by YouHaveProblems)
    This was really rubbish
    Everyone Respires

    Yo mammas fat
    with all them spare tyres
    (Original post by YouHaveProblems)
    This was really rubbish
    Everyone Respires

    Yo mammas fat
    with all them spare tyres
    I don't think you read between the lines,
    I'm not surprised, but damn yo momma fine.

    Now get out of here and go read your book,
    Before I give you a dirty right hook.


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    (Original post by Bezoar)
    This is far more than
    2 stanzas, 4 lines.

    I think you should reevaluate
    And make better use of your time.
    State the obvious, well done.
    I hate to state the obvious but you are dumb.

    Would've ended here but,
    You would've probably stated the obvious again.




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    (Original post by AdeptDz)
    State the obvious, well done.
    I hate to state the obvious but you are dumb.

    Would've ended here but,
    You would've probably stated the obvious again.




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    You just repeated the same phrase three times
    I didn't know Lil Wayne used TSR!

    (Or maybe another **** rapper, like waka flocka)
    Who knows? I guess the internet is rather bizzare.
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    Has this really turned into a rap battle?
    Dear me, I'm filled with sorrow

    It's 2am, dear God, go to sleep
    Cause y'all have lectures tomorrow
 
 
 
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