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    let's celebrate the changing season with some 5-7-5 action


    chlorophyll has gone
    and the leaves are sere and brown
    xanthophyll and death
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    (Original post by the bear)
    let's celebrate the changing season with some 5-7-5 action

    chlorophyll has gone
    and the leaves are sere and brown
    xanthophyll and death
    absolutely delightful
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    (Original post by CheeseIsVeg)
    absolutely delightful
    now we turn to you
    a cheesey haiku for us
    that would be just grate
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    (Original post by the bear)
    now we turn to you
    a cheesey haiku for us
    that would be just grate
    turning to me, brie
    Desperate for poetry, can it be?
    Sorry, not my cuppa tea
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    :rofl: told you I can't
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    (Original post by CheeseIsVeg)
    turning to me, brie
    Desperate for poetry, can it be?
    Sorry, not my cuppa tea
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    :rofl: told you I can't
    the first line was fab
    it spiralled out of control
    in lines two and three
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    the first line was fab
    it spiralled out of control
    in lines two and three
    why thank you Mr
    I said, not my cup of tea
    screw lines 2 and 3
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    The leaves are falling,
    Lying in piles on the ground.
    Everyone jump in!
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    (Original post by CheeseIsVeg)
    why thank you Mr
    I said, not my cup of tea
    screw lines 2 and 3
    you have made us proud
    your second haiku is crisp
    like brie from the fridge
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    (Original post by the bear)
    you have made us proud
    your second haiku is crisp
    like brie from the fridge
    you have made me blush
    alas I must start to hush
    but no need to rush
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    Christmas is coming!
    Let us forget Halloween
    Those clowns can naff off
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    I am so hungry
    I would like a slice of cake
    Please give me some food
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    gaily colored lights
    whirling fairground attraction
    calculate the force
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    change the clocks tonite
    an extra hour in your pit
    embrace the darkness
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    I am so thirsty
    i would like some lemonade
    please give me a drink
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    Halloween is near
    But I stay at home with movies
    And dread going to school
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    I want cake right now
    I want cake right now,right now
    I want cake right now
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    Haikus are cool things
    Should I try a fancy font
    Well, here goes nothing
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    (Original post by the bear)
    let's celebrate the changing season with some 5-7-5 action
    chlorophyll has gone
    and the leaves are sere and brown
    xanthophyll and death
    Did you really have create a new thread to begin a new haiku? autumn? is there not an autumn thread from the last year? complaints aside, it is haiku time!

    Another season
    in another time this year
    Here comes the autumn!
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    (Original post by tamil fever)
    Halloween is near
    But I stay at home with movies
    And dread going to school
    :beard:
    the syllable scheme
    is not entirely correct
    check lines 2 and 3


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    (Original post by tamil fever)
    I want cake right now
    I want cake right now,right now
    I want cake right now
    this one is perfect
    you can do it if you try
    you deserve your cake
 
 
 
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