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1) I am eager to study 'XYZ' and thus expand my knowledge about the underlying theory of 'ZXP'
2) I am eager to study 'XYZ'and thus expand my knowledge in the underlying theory of 'ZXP'
Basically do I use 'about' or 'in'
2) I am eager to study 'XYZ'and thus expand my knowledge in the underlying theory of 'ZXP'
Basically do I use 'about' or 'in'
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I would say number 1 makes more sense. Also I'd remove the word underlying because it really adds nothing to the sentence 
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3) I am eager to study 'XYZ' and thus expand my knowledge of the underlying theory
4) I am eager to study 'XYZ' and thus expand my knowledge around the underlying theory
You've got so many choices- choose your destiny.
4) I am eager to study 'XYZ' and thus expand my knowledge around the underlying theory
You've got so many choices- choose your destiny.
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