can someone help me analyse this quote

‘The coconuts rained from the sawdust like brown hail stones from a stormy sky’

i've said that there is alliteration in 'stormy sky' but i dont know what effect this has

Reply 1

Naomeyz_01

Simile when it says "brown hail stones.."

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Reply 2

debbie394

Original post by Naomeyz_01

Simile when it says "like saw dust.."

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what is the effect of this though

Reply 3

Naomeyz_01

Personification when it says "the coconuts rained"

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Reply 4

Sabz152

'Stormy sky,' is effective as it suggests anger.

Reply 5

trabajadora

Original post by esmeralda123

‘The coconuts rained from the sawdust like brown hail stones from a stormy sky’

i've said that there is alliteration in 'stormy sky' but i dont know what effect this has

Idk if this is too much of a reach, but when you say ''stormy sky'' it's almost like you're making a hissing sound which implies that there's anger/evilness.

Reply 6

annonymous_234

Original post by esmeralda123

‘The coconuts rained from the sawdust like brown hail stones from a stormy sky’

i've said that there is alliteration in 'stormy sky' but i dont know what effect this has

Rain= depressing? (since rain is associated with depression or sadness)
Brown= dark colour (foreshadows dark events which will later occur)
Stormy= Anger