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can someone check the grammar and punctuation of this paragraph.

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Full stop instead of semi colon after 'chosen' (first sentence).
Frequently instead of frequent (it's an adverb modifying the verb 'converse', not an adjective).

More to the point, I'm concerned about the content if this is a UCAS PS. It says nothing about the course you want to study; just the job you want at the end of it! Have you tried posting in the Personal Statement help forum?
Original post by Reality Check
Full stop instead of semi colon after 'chosen' (first sentence).
Frequently instead of frequent (it's an adverb modifying the verb 'converse', not an adjective).

More to the point, I'm concerned about the content if this is a UCAS PS. It says nothing about the course you want to study; just the job you want at the end of it! Have you tried posting in the Personal Statement help forum?


This is an application to social mobility foundation! Not university!
Original post by ihatehannah
This is an application to social mobility foundation! Not university!


Right, ok - yes and I see that you've already said that (sorry).

I would make the grammatical and punctuation corrections then.

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