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    I can't find a forum where people post essays to be read and given feedback on so i've started one.

    I'm going to kick it off with an essay i've just done on the holism vs reductionism debate.

    I will try to give feedback on other peoples essays if you want to post them here too.

    I understand that I don't have the best style of writing but I like to think my knowledge of psychology is sufficient to help others.

    Remember the best way to learn is by teaching other people.

    Thanks
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    Hi, this is quite brilliant. I particularly like your mastery of the concepts discussed. However, your paper would do with some editing and citations. You can use citations in APA format.
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    Thank you for your advice. Very much appriciated
 
 
 
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