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    prépare yourself
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    You'll be terrified after reading part 8
    Singing "Be Prepared" in my head

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    Singing "Be Prepared" in my head

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    :rofl:
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    could I be in the story? / could i help write one?

    THESE ARE AMAZING.
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    could I be in the story? / could i help write one?

    THESE ARE AMAZING.
    Are you bad? :mmm:
    Ahahaha thanks :rofl:
    Could do with a second opinion with part 8 actually, I'll PM you when I've a draft?
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    (Original post by CheeseIsVeg)
    Are you bad? :mmm:
    Ahahaha thanks :rofl:
    Could do with a second opinion with part 8 actually, I'll PM you when I've a draft?
    cool alright I'll go load my laptop (typing on my phone atm)
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    (Original post by bizzy_penguin)
    cool alright I'll go load my laptop (typing on my phone atm)
    I might be an hour or two so don't rush yourself
    Part 8 needs to be perfect :love:
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    (Original post by CheeseIsVeg)
    I might be an hour or two so don't rush yourself
    Part 8 needs to be perfect :love:
    certainly it does I shall revise the story so far
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    (Original post by bizzy_penguin)
    certainly it does I shall revise the story so far
    Yes, do catch up!
    Some readers may be able to pick out the hints and clues along the way to what will be occurring in part 8.
    I have hypothesised that the story will end between part 10-15 depending on how much I draw it out (unsure as of yet).
    I was thinking of writing an analysis so that it becomes clear but idk if this is dull.

    Wow I am tired, what am I even saying?
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    (Original post by CheeseIsVeg)
    Matrix123 had arrived with Andy98 alongside SassKing13 who'd brought round bourbons for everyone and was chatting to Matrix about his latest favourite song :mmm:
    (Original post by CheeseIsVeg)
    Matrix123 and Andy98 sat together whilst SassKing13 tried to convert CleverSquirrel to the Bunnymen people band thing. She was having none of it though and anticipated the start of the wedding as she sat down.
    :rofl: This thread is amazing
    And happy belated birthday to Rhythmical! :party:

    I like the way all mine are just me with Andy and SassKing :rofl:
    You made a slight error though...
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    SassKing13 brought along oreos, not bourbons :mmm:



    The Bunnymen are a great band

    Edit: and AndrewSCO is the priest? :lol: I must admit, that made me laugh :toofunny:
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    (Original post by Matrix123)
    :rofl: This thread is amazing
    And happy belated birthday to Rhythmical! :party:

    I like the way all mine are just me with Andy and SassKing :rofl:
    You made a slight error though...
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    SassKing13 brought along oreos, not bourbons :mmm:




    The Bunnymen are a great band

    Edit: and AndrewSCO is the priest? :lol: I must admit, that made me laugh :toofunny:
    Part 8, Matrix, Part 8, all shall be revealed in part 8

    MY STOREE
    No oreos allowed
    ONLY BOURBONS :shakecane:

    sure thang
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    (Original post by Matrix123)
    :rofl: This thread is amazing
    And happy belated birthday to Rhythmical! :party:

    I like the way all mine are just me with Andy and SassKing :rofl:
    You made a slight error though...
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    SassKing13 brought along oreos, not bourbons :mmm:




    The Bunnymen are a great band

    Edit: and AndrewSCO is the priest? :lol: I must admit, that made me laugh :toofunny:
    Aww than you Matrix! :hugs:
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    (Original post by CheeseIsVeg)
    Yes, do catch up!
    Some readers may be able to pick out the hints and clues along the way to what will be occurring in part 8.
    I have hypothesised that the story will end between part 10-15 depending on how much I draw it out (unsure as of yet).
    I was thinking of writing an analysis so that it becomes clear but idk if this is dull.

    Wow I am tired, what am I even saying?
    yes the drawings would be amazing!
    The story's got around 3000 words as Word tells me... for some reason I can't stop thinking of tsr gems as similar to the crystals above Sims heads in sims freeplay!
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    (Original post by bizzy_penguin)
    yes the drawings would be amazing!
    The story's got around 3000 words as Word tells me... for some reason I can't stop thinking of tsr gems as similar to the crystals above Sims heads in sims freeplay!
    What
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    about? :confused:
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    (Original post by CheeseIsVeg)
    What
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    omg, this is probably kinda weird now I think about it
    So basically I copied and pasted each part of the story into word so the story has a hard copy without comments in between so its easier to follow
    I can PM it to you if you want
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    (Original post by bizzy_penguin)
    omg, this is probably kinda weird now I think about it
    So basically I copied and pasted each part of the story into word so the story has a hard copy without comments in between so its easier to follow
    I can PM it to you if you want
    I've already done that :mmm:
    I write it in word before I do it!
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    (Original post by CheeseIsVeg)
    I've already done that :mmm:
    I write it in word before I do it!
    ikr very wise
    I blame that annoying advert tbh :unimpressed:
    flicking between pages has been a little annoying since it appeared...
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    (Original post by CheeseIsVeg)
    Part 7 - The wedding commences
    Matrix123 and Andy98 sat together whilst SassKing13 tried to convert CleverSquirrel to the Bunnymen people band thing. She was having none of it though and anticipated the start of the wedding as she sat down.

    CoolCavy was giving hugs to everyone whilst StrawbAri was taking a few pre-wedding group selfie thingies.

    hezzlington was not really listening to Paracosm and titfortat discussing their new playlist, he was checking out the well-dressed people as they poured through the door. :mmm:

    04MR17 was still persuading Snufkin and Edminzodo to join the counting society and Bluebutterfly310 was helping him. Eventually Edminzodo began lecturing them on why Ramesses the II was so great

    IKEAPanda37 had just made it in time to catch a seat who was swiftly followed by PrincessBO$$ who'd just got back from an Arsenal match and was buzzing. markovchain17 rushed in at the back, he was to be the DJ for later on :danceboy:

    XOR_ , still in a strop, was the first to sit down at the far side, joined by SeanFM who was trying to keep the peace. the bear swiftly followed, his paws sticky from eating M&S chocolates :teehee:ForestShadow joined them, talking to hezzlington about the finely dressed females.

    Hydeman and Plantagenet Crown had started to discuss the religious symbolism involved in a marriage and critiqued the makeshift altar that had been placed in the hall. “Someone couldn’t afford to be in a church” chuckled Zacken , hearing their argument. They sat down, further debating about religious symbolism and its importance.

    Captain Jack had found Fox Corner who had stopped off to buy some wedding gifts, Cpn Jack showed her the amazing goodies he’d bought at M&S and they sat together, planning awesome thread ideas :mmm:

    AndrewSCO , the priest saw off Plagioclase , the janitor, who went back to his little room next to the hall, with only the mice for company.

    AndrewSCO retrieved his Bible and went to the front of the altar. He was ready.
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    13 1 20 8 42 , the groom, waited with UWS for the bride.

    "I bet you she'll be absolutely beautiful", said UWS

    "Yeah", agreed 13 1 20 8 42 , "I hope she likes the ring I picked".

    Once the guests had all settled, someone put on some music

    and the bridesmaids started to walk in…

    ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------

    Rhythmical wore an elegant dress, she had her hair half up and half down and everyone stopped and stared, making her blush massively :mmm:

    SinsNotTragedies held her sparkly lace train, with BurstingBubbles and Nirvana1989-1994 holding the sides of it

    TheonlyMrsHolmes , serah.exe , Rhaenys10 and CheeseIsVeg closely followed, flowers in hand but retro_turtles had managed to trip up on the way there and was far behind

    "oh bugger" she muttered and tried to catch up as best she could.

    Eventually @Rhythmical was handed over to @Uws who then handed her over to @13 1 20 8 42

    The bridesmaids sat down, retro_turtles perched on the edge, @uws behind @xor_ :mmm:

    AndrewSCO started to read from his Bible...
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    “Friends, we have been invited here to share with @Rhythmical and @13 1 20 8 42 in a most important time in their lives. In the time they have been together, their love for and understanding of each other has grown and matured. Now they have decided to live their lives together as husband and wife.”

    “Turtles - stop texting”, whispered Cheese.
    Turtles ignored Cheese and continued to text.
    Cheese sighed.

    “Would you bow with me as we ask the Lord's blessing on our time together today?”

    @UWS thought he could hear something coming from the window…

    “Our Father in heaven, Creator, Savior, and Designer of marriage, we turn to you this afternoon, asking that you be glorified by what takes place. That this ceremony would honor you, and reflect the seriousness of the vows to be spoken. Might this service be a reminder to us who have spoken similar vows to our spouses in the past. Might it be instructive to those yet considering such a commitment in their future.”

    No there was definitely some tapping…

    “Might this ceremony be a fitting beginning for @Rhythmical and @13 1 20 8 42 as they commit themselves before this company to pursue a Christ-centered life together. We ask it in Jesus' name, Amen –“

    And there was an almighty crash…

    Stay tuned for part 8
    Your depiction of me is accurate tbh
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    (Original post by Matrix123)
    :rofl: This thread is amazing
    And happy belated birthday to Rhythmical! :party:

    I like the way all mine are just me with Andy and SassKing :rofl:
    You made a slight error though...
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    SassKing13 brought along oreos, not bourbons :mmm:




    The Bunnymen are a great band

    Edit: and AndrewSCO is the priest? :lol: I must admit, that made me laugh :toofunny:
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    (Original post by CheeseIsVeg)
    Part 8, Matrix, Part 8, all shall be revealed in part 8

    MY STOREE
    No oreos allowed
    ONLY BOURBONS :shakecane:

    sure thang
    Oooh :excited:

    You're store? :lol:
    Haha OK Cheese :rolleyes:
    (Original post by Rhythmical)
    Aww than you Matrix! :hugs:
    No problem! :penguinhug:
    (Original post by SassKing13)
    :rofl:
    I guess it's bourbons then
 
 
 
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