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    (Original post by cambio wechsel)
    Oh dear. And it doesn't get any better pal...



    Back as once were
    Same room, same bed
    Two sights re-seen, two books re-read
    Two too full bellies too well fed

    Sharp of chin in flat of neck
    Knee fit snug in pit of knee
    Mouths both dry as triple sec
    My 2H become 3B

    She talks of who's stood in between
    A Jeff, a Dan, our shared friend Mark
    Too young, too self-possessed, too keen
    His car, her flat, their windswept park

    Back as once were
    Same room, same bed
    Hey, Stranger!
    But too well re-met




    this is first class stuff Cambio. see me after school :mmm:
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    (Original post by airportsh8me)
    Death spells and romantic poetry? Interesting combination
    Are you talking about the OP's poem? there are so many poems by now that I have just problems to refer. That is why I am asking you.
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    (Original post by cambio wechsel)
    It's too concrete for me mate.


    Cambio's latest masterpiece hits the streets :teehee:
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    (Original post by Mistletoe)
    I am that feint glow
    Did you mean to use feint? Or did you just misspell faint? I ask as it changes the meaning significantly.
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    (Original post by cambio wechsel)
    Oh dear.
    Love it.
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    Antares lights our nuptial bower
    As midnight stocks begin to flower
    Aromas sweet and touches sticky
    She says nice things about my micky


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    Antares lights our nuptial bower
    As midnight stocks begin to flower
    Aromas sweet and touches sticky
    She says nice things about my micky
    mouse degree in golf course studies
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    on TSR, oh so much hate
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    (Original post by the bear)
    Antares lights our nuptial bower
    As midnight stocks begin to flower
    Aromas sweet and touches sticky
    She says nice things about my micky


    Those stars, as they send down their rays
    To light our naughty doings,
    They also teach us that a phrase
    (That's worth repeated viewings)
    "To slip a Mickey Finn in" lays
    The base for maidens' ruins
    So heed my words and mend your ways
    When you encounter bruins.





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    Antares lights our nuptial bower
    As midnight stocks begin to flower
    Aromas sweet and touches sticky
    She says nice things about my micky



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    (Original post by cambio wechsel)





    Antares lights our nuptial bower
    As midnight stocks begin to flower
    Aromas sweet and touches sticky
    She says nice things about my micky
    mouse degree in golf course studies
    scoffed at by my online buddies
    in Educational Debate
    on TSR, oh so much hate





    (Original post by Good bloke)






    Those stars, as they send down their rays
    To light our naughty doings,
    They also teach us that a phrase
    (That's worth repeated viewings)
    "To slip a Mickey Finn in" lays
    The base for maidens' ruins
    So heed my words and mend your ways
    When you encounter bruins.




    starshine lights my lonely tryst
    a glowworm helps me find my wryst;
    if only i had charged my phone
    i would not lie here all alone
    i could have summoned X and Y
    to join me 'neath the Winter Sky
    where bracken makes a comfy bed
    and rabbit fur conceals my head;
    instead of seeking pleasure solo
    i could be shouting stuff like YOLO;
    now alone by sedges rank
    i am obliged to have a ****




 
 
 
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