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    sorry, this is very insignificant but can somebody please correct this? "J'aime écrire parce qu'il est relaxant! Mon ambition est de publier un livre avant 30 ans. Cependant, selon mes parents, c'est très improbable."- thank you!

    "J'aime écrire parce que c'est relaxant!"
    "Mon ambition est de publier un livre avant 30 ans." (Before reaching 30? "... avant d'avoir 30 ans." In the next 30 years? "... dans les 30 prochaines années.")
    "Cependant, selon mes parents, c'est très improbable." (That formulation is segmented, it doesn't flow. "Cela dit, mes parents prétendent que c'est improbable." "Malheureusement, mes parents pensent que je ne pourrais pas y arriver.")
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