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    Hi soo, I am just wondering like ill put in the sentence, and just want to know whether me putting in as it came of age is so wrong, I mean i think it is, but yeah the main phrase that i think is wrong "and as it came of completion" I use to have it "when the time came" but apparently I wasnt allowed, that so yeah can anybody help?

    As several months passed by, and we moved into 2005, I eagerly awaited the finishing touches on the renovations being conducted at my original home, and as it came of completion, I walked down from the rental with Holly, all while both of us being excited at the prospect of seeing out the new home once and for all.
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    (Original post by SwampMagic)
    Hi soo, I am just wondering like ill put in the sentence, and just want to know whether me putting in as it came of age is so wrong, I mean i think it is, but yeah the main phrase that i think is wrong "and as it came of completion" I use to have it "when the time came" but apparently I wasnt allowed, that so yeah can anybody help?

    As several months passed by, and we moved into 2005, I eagerly awaited the finishing touches on the renovations being conducted at my original home, and as it came of completion, I walked down from the rental with Holly, all while both of us being excited at the prospect of seeing out the new home once and for all.
    You can do it if you want.
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    (Original post by UWS)
    You can do it if you want.
    but does it sound good and correct?
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    (Original post by SwampMagic)
    but does it sound good and correct?
    It didn't really make sense but Holly seems happy?
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    Hahaha well she is except today she is so grumpy. and any ideas on how to make it make more sense?
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    (Original post by SwampMagic)
    Hahaha well she is except today she is so grumpy. and any ideas on how to make it make more sense?
    "came to completion" should fix it.
 
 
 
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