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Reply 1

No, you can't indent paragraphs

Reply 2

I have another question - when I pasted my PS onto UCAS, and previewed it, the line spaces between paragraphs were intact. But when I previewed the whole thing at the end the line spaces were gone. :s-smilie: What does this mean???

Reply 3

All spare lines and indentations disappear when your PS gets onto UCAS, and all new paragraphs get started by just a new line. I tried to change mine but it just changes it back, which looks really messy, but everyone's will be like it so it's nothing to worry about :smile:

Reply 4

mary21
All spare lines and indentations disappear when your PS gets onto UCAS, and all new paragraphs get started by just a new line. I tried to change mine but it just changes it back, which looks really messy, but everyone's will be like it so it's nothing to worry about :smile:


Blank lines don't disappear.
Your statement will look to the admissions tutor as it does when you preview it before you save it [here, blank lines should show up.]. When you view the whole application, it's usually squished together in a massive lump but as far as I'm aware that is NOT how the admissions tutors will see it.

Reply 5

Excalibur
I have another question - when I pasted my PS onto UCAS, and previewed it, the line spaces between paragraphs were intact. But when I previewed the whole thing at the end the line spaces were gone. :s-smilie: What does this mean???

That happened to me as well.
But when I checked it in Internet Explorer (I normally use Firefox), the lines were there... :s-smilie:

Reply 6

So if I want to paragraph it - which is important isnt it? - I'm going to have to use blank lines for paragraphs :eek:

Reply 7

totalfussball
So if I want to paragraph it - which is important isnt it? - I'm going to have to use blank lines for paragraphs :eek:

Yes you will.
I decided that starting each paragraph on the next line was good enough as I couldn't cut it down any more and I had used 47 lines and 3999 characters.

Reply 8

UCAS and Unis know that the system won't accept paragraph indents etc, so they accept it. Just start a paragraph on a new line (but don't miss one out, you need the space)

Reply 9

namakemono
Just start a paragraph on a new line (but don't miss one out, you need the space)


No you don't - or shouldn't. You need to make it legible - which it isn't if it is one amorphous mass of text.

You really should be able to write it sufficiently succinctly to allow yourself room for propoer paragraphs with blank lines. Treat it as a test. You pass the test if the admissions tutor thinks "what a well laid out PS".

Reply 10

Good bloke
No you don't - or shouldn't. You need to make it legible - which it isn't if it is one amorphous mass of text.

You really should be able to write it sufficiently succinctly to allow yourself room for propoer paragraphs with blank lines. Treat it as a test. You pass the test if the admissions tutor thinks "what a well laid out PS".

You sound like you know what you're talking about. Have you considered editing our wiki?

Reply 11

Good bloke
No you don't - or shouldn't. You need to make it legible - which it isn't if it is one amorphous mass of text.

You really should be able to write it sufficiently succinctly to allow yourself room for propoer paragraphs with blank lines. Treat it as a test. You pass the test if the admissions tutor thinks "what a well laid out PS".


I so passed that test :biggrin: My PS started too long with nothing I thought I could cut out, but after getting people to read through and comment I pruned it back and had plenty of room for a line between each paragraph :smile:

Reply 12

to be fair tho, sometimes everything is valuable. in the end i had to cut valuable information out of my ps so i could fit it all in and i understand that medicine is different in some regards but filling your space doesn't necessarily mean that it isn't concise or that any of your information is superfluous.

Reply 13

bright star
to be fair tho, sometimes everything is valuable. in the end i had to cut valuable information out of my ps so i could fit it all in and i understand that medicine is different in some regards but filling your space doesn't necessarily mean that it isn't concise or that any of your information is superfluous.


What you must try and remember is that the piece should be considered as a whole. Trying to squeeze in every last character's worth of detail, if it reduces the overall flow and legibility, is damaging to your message. You have to prioritise what you put in. Nearly everyone can write a 5,000 character piece effectively over 70 lines. Your challenge is to do it in 4,000 characters over 47 lines and this involves making some tough decisions.

It is your only opportunity to show directly to the admissions tutor how effective you are at communicating and how intelligently you can handle the applications process. If your message is diluted by bad spelling, grammar, punctuation, layout, irrelevant (or less relevant) detail, cliche or gratuitous bull**** you will be the loser and competitors will be handed an advantage over you.

And cliche (for the avoidance of doubt, and contrary to what a lot of teachers may tell you) in this context includes that old chestnut of saying, for instance, that you became determined on a career in engineering from the time you made a model of the Eiffel Tower in Meccano at the age of ten.

And just to illustrate the point, here is the same message all scrunched up to hit a line limit (and bear in mind that your PS would look much worse because the lines are shorter relative to your message:

What you must try and remember is that the piece should be considered as a whole. Trying to squeeze in every last character's worth of detail, if it reduces the overall flow and legibility, is damaging to your message. You have to prioritise what you put in. Nearly everyone can write a 5,000 character piece effectively over 70 lines. Your challenge is to do it in 4,000 characters over 47 lines and this involves making some tough decisions.
It is your only opportunity to show directly to the admissions tutor how effective you are at communicating and how intelligently you can handle the applications process. If your message is diluted by bad spelling, grammar, punctuation, layout, irrelevant (or less relevant) detail, cliche or gratuitous bull**** you will be the loser and competitors will be handed an advantage over you.
And cliche (for the avoidance of doubt, and contrary to what a lot of teachers may tell you) in this context includes that old chestnut of saying, for instance, that you became determined on a career in engineering from the time you made a model of the Eiffel Tower in Meccano at the age of ten.

Reply 14

You basically have two choices.
You can either avoid spaces between lines for the sake of including all of the info in your PS, which you may deem vital to the success of your application.
Instead, you could have blanks in between paprgraphs, thus making your PS look neat and well organised, at the expense of 7-10 lines of what could be the info to give you enough marks for an interview.
I guess it's a matter of personal preferance as to which option you choose.

Reply 15

Toffee_Kid
You basically have two choices.
You can either avoid spaces between lines for the sake of including all of the info in your PS, which you may deem vital to the success of your application.
Instead, you could have blanks in between paprgraphs, thus making your PS look neat and well organised, at the expense of 7-10 lines of what could be the info to give you enough marks for an interview.
I guess it's a matter of personal preferance as to which option you choose.


Holy thread resurrection, Batman!

There are always ways of cutting down the text in a personal statement without losing the message. Always. Ten paragraphs is probably too many for the space available, anyway. Four to seven is probably a better range to aim for.

Reply 16

Good bloke
What you must try and remember is that the piece should be considered as a whole. Trying to squeeze in every last character's worth of detail, if it reduces the overall flow and legibility, is damaging to your message. You have to prioritise what you put in. Nearly everyone can write a 5,000 character piece effectively over 70 lines. Your challenge is to do it in 4,000 characters over 47 lines and this involves making some tough decisions.
It is your only opportunity to show directly to the admissions tutor how effective you are at communicating and how intelligently you can handle the applications process. If your message is diluted by bad spelling, grammar, punctuation, layout, irrelevant (or less relevant) detail, cliche or gratuitous bull**** you will be the loser and competitors will be handed an advantage over you.
And cliche (for the avoidance of doubt, and contrary to what a lot of teachers may tell you) in this context includes that old chestnut of saying, for instance, that you became determined on a career in engineering from the time you made a model of the Eiffel Tower in Meccano at the age of ten.
And just to illustrate the point, here is the same message all scrunched up to hit a line limit (and bear in mind that your PS would look much worse because the lines are shorter relative to your message:
What you must try and remember is that the piece should be considered as a whole. Trying to squeeze in every last character's worth of detail, if it reduces the overall flow and legibility, is damaging to your message. You have to prioritise what you put in. Nearly everyone can write a 5,000 character piece effectively over 70 lines. Your challenge is to do it in 4,000 characters over 47 lines and this involves making some tough decisions.
It is your only opportunity to show directly to the admissions tutor how effective you are at communicating and how intelligently you can handle the applications process. If your message is diluted by bad spelling, grammar, punctuation, layout, irrelevant (or less relevant) detail, cliche or gratuitous bull**** you will be the loser and competitors will be handed an advantage over you.
And cliche (for the avoidance of doubt, and contrary to what a lot of teachers may tell you) in this context includes that old chestnut of saying, for instance, that you became determined on a career in engineering from the time you made a model of the Eiffel Tower in Meccano at the age of ten.



Spaces between paragraphs is very important. I just edited his post and removed the spaces between paragraphs and doesn't it but you off reading it? But with spaces it makes it more manageable to read, and it looks better.

Reply 17

rotor
Spaces between paragraphs is very important. I just edited his post and removed the spaces between paragraphs and doesn't it but you off reading it? But with spaces it makes it more manageable to read, and it looks better.


Nicely done.:smile:

Reply 18

lol at the necroposting, but yea, what everyone else said!

Paragraphs are really important to make it light for the admissions people to read.

Reply 19

Toiletpaper8
lol at the necroposting, but yea, what everyone else said!

Paragraphs are really important to make it light for the admissions people to read.


Ooops, I saw a link back to this in another recent thread so I assumed this was a recent thread!