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Hi there,

I'm just wrapping up my coursework on the Cold War however, I don't feel like I've done my absolute best. The question I've been set is "to what extent was the cold war inevitable? " Using 3 different historian interpretations with 2 lesser sources. I've structured it following the exemplar on the edexcel website by analysing each interpretation and I've tried to make connections and evaluate. However, I don't feel this is overly sophisticated, it feels too rigid and I would prefer to structure it like an essay.

The main problem I have is with the question, where do I draw the line with the cold war's inevitability?

Can anyone give me some pointers with essay structure, factors in the Inevitability of the cold war and factors that suggest the cold war was not inevitable?

I'm using sources by Schlesinger, Kerry R Bolton and Wilson Miscamble.

Any help would be appreciated, I really need to submit this in the next couple of days. Thanks!
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Sorry you've not had any responses about this. Are you sure you've posted in the right place? Here's a link to our subject forum which should help get you more responses if you post there.


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