thanks for the tag but the geo modules Im choosing are biodiveristy and energy mix for my specialists, we did do general work on the others so let me see..
for the 1st one, yes you need a conclusion. for anything worth more than 10marks, intro and conclusion is vital.
Just a vague summing up sentence like 'in conclusion urban industrial heritage can be used to regenerate an area in many ways including providing x/y/z/ attractions and attracting more people from x/y/z/ target groups' usually more than that helps too, draw your ideas in like a spider diagram and use your key words
for intros, I like to define key words (at least in my 70 mark edexcel board exams) maybe define regenerate/urban industrial heritage?
for the 2nd, you essays need to have similar detail for similar marks , so again look back at your exam board and what they expect. 4 paras are fine if they amount to smiliar detail/words if theyre the same mark style questions/
conclusion is still possible with 'describe' key word, are there any general trends in all the case studies or specific anomalies?
finally your structure is very case study based which is good but Id do a factor by factor one instead if possible
eg for your 1st one classify your case studys to sport regeneration for olympics, park regeneration or coast regeneration
Just suggestions and again this isnt really my topic or even exam board, just try your best and get my general advice