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calvin_kg
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Could you please polish the following and point out the gramatical or any mistakes. Thanks.


"Hi, Laten and family, sorry for my late reply since the school
mid-term test has just passed. We, Calvin and I, were very busy in
correcting exam papers. How is your "post-vacation depression"? I like that three words because it is fresh to me. Laten, could you write me letters often so that I can learn more from you and I can communicate with you much easily.

Laten, the following messages are given from Sara: " Hi,Mom , I
miss you very much, I want to see you in the coming Chinese New year, during that time, we can go shopping and I will give you a surprise. Mom , the package has been received last week. It is a big surprise, I like it very much, it gives me warm, comfort and safety. Thank you from the bottom of my heart. (Let me tell you a secret, Mom and Dad can hold me better and I feel much comfortable now.)"
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Catty22
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Report 16 years ago
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Here you go heres how I think it should go, not that I am a expert or anything.


"Hi, Laten and family, sorry for my late reply to your letter since the school
mid-term test has just passed. We, Calvin and I, were very busy in
correcting exam papers. How is your "post-vacation depression"? I like those three words because they are fresh to me. Laten, could you write me letters often so that I can learn more from you and I can communicate with you much more easily.

Laten, the following messages are from Sara: " Hi,Mom , I
miss you very much, I want to see you in the coming Chinese New year, during that time, we can go shopping and I will give you a surprise. Mom , the package has been received last week. It is a big surprise, I like it very much, it gives me comfort, safety and keeps me warm. Thank you from the bottom of my heart. (Let me tell you a secret, Mom and Dad can hold me better and I feel much comfortable now.)"
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