OK - I have just finished reading HBP after trying to make it last as long as possible! lol. I haven't read all 48 pages written here so far, so sorry if I repeat anything but here's what I have to say about the book:
* The Characters:
For the first time in the books, I disliked Harry, Ron and Hermione's characters. Harry has become rude and disrespectful of his elders, even to Dumbledore! I was frustrated about the characters' inability to talk to one another. Seemed harry was silent for half the book. Ron and Hermione's lack of communication was truely irritating. I agree with other posters who have mentioned that Tonks and Lupin getting together was random, and that JKR has dealt too briefly with important issues such as love and death which in my opinion should never be dealt with as lightly as they were dealt with in this book.
* Quidditch:
When Harry was made Captain of the Quiditch team, I thought he'd be good at it, but when it came down to it I was really disappointed in him. He hardly involved himself with the team, had no enthusiasm and had no tips to give his team-mates...
* The Green Potion:
WHY did Dumbledore drink the potion when he could have thrown it away instead? seemed a stupid thing for him to do. It was bound to hurt him... a powerful wizard like him should have had other options and other ways of getting rid of a potion than drinking it.
* Malfoy's Task
Wasn't Malfoy's task to kill Dumbledore, or else Voldemort would kill him? well, seems to me Draco didnt complete his task.. does that mean he and his family will be dead by the beginning of the next book?
* Harry's New Search for Horcruxes
Seems to me Harry hasn't got enough knowledge or experience to find a Horcrux on his own. We saw how unhelpful he was to Dumbledore in finding the locket. There's no way Harry will be able to do anything to the level of great wizards like Dumbledore or Voldemort. He just doesnt know enough.
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Overall, like many, I was disappointed by the book's weak plot, undeveloped characters and muddled sections of text. I was puzzled by JKR's sudden change in writing style. Lets hope she re-discovers her original style in time for the text book.
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