I've been trying to write my English PS all day and I just can't get it to sound good. I have so much stuff to say but I'm just finding it difficult to put down on paper. And I keep starting sentences with "I"
Just write it! No matter how bad it sounds, get all of those words out of your head and onto the paper. If it's not a full sentence or isn't quite grammatically correct, include it!
Then, leave it for a few hours and go and watch Neighbours.
Then when you come back to it all your ideas will be there and you can play with them to make it make sense.
If your really habving trouble writing it write down lots of sentances you could use like "I did work experiance at xxx" or "I particularly enjoy the xxx aspect of my subject" on a piece of paper. Cut up the piece of paper and randomly arrange the strips. Then move them around until you're more satisfied with the order.
Once you've done this you should have a good idea what you're writing about and in what order. Now just turn the arranged strips into a personal statement.
When I was writing my personal statement, I started by putting down all my random, jumbled ideas in bullet point form, and then when I really couldn’t think of any more, I went over what I had so far, and got rid of those points which seemed stupid or irrelevant, and grouped together those which were really part of the same general idea, putting them in order, so that they made sense. This then made it easier to see how to link all my thoughts together. Basically, if you just start with bullet points and use them to organise you ideas, and then extend them into full sentences, your PS almost writes itself.