I guess I have a decent structured personal Statement.
Introduction -
A bit about myself
The course I am ardent to study
A bit about my personal experience (not too deep yet not too basic, it links with why I want to do my course)
Second para -
Academics
Talk about my main subject which will allow me access to the course
I talk briefly about my own independent research which will help me in uni.
Paragraph 3-
Academics
I spoke about how my other irrelevant subjects will actually help me during university e.g. group work and self-management
Pararaph 4-
News Article/Personal attributes
In-depth.
Paragraph 5-
Work experience
I gave examples and skills that I have gained and why its important for uni
Paragraph 6-
Very deep personal experience
I gave examples and why the experience is relevant to my course
And thats it... Bearing in mind all the things I have spoken about relate to my course.
I am just stuck on how to extend on the paragraph about my academics!!!! Like, I don't want to be in-depth and talk about the topic that I have mentioned e.g. Atoms (I did not choose atoms as my own independent research, I am just giving an example because i dont want my work to be plagiarised lmao, safety is priority guys)...But I did talk about how independent research will help me in university