Very nice, but can I suggest a couple of things to think about:
You perhaps should include when/where heating/warming is required, throughout
Some recognition of secondary alcohol on the 1st one (admittedly it is just the same as AS)
Acknowledgement of Markovnikov's rule - you go from an alkene to a primary alcohol, which would require ethene as your alkane; a secondary alcohol is the major product with other alkenes.
Addition polymerisation is missing throughout
A minor one: alkene + halogen -> dihaloalkane is missing (but again it is just he same as + hydrogen halide)
It is interesting that you create 2,4,6-tribromophenylamine, rather than the reaction on the specification from phenol - it is correct and better fits your scheme, but...
Which leads to 'directing effects' are missing
I hope I am not coming across as negative, it is a very good go at it and better than any of my students have ever done. I can't say I have ever done better, either.
If you improve it, I'll have to steal it and pass it off as my own work
