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How to write a grade 9 PEE paragraph in English? watch

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    In my class, everyone somehow gets grade 7s, 8s and 9s while I'm tidally locked in 6. My question is what details do I add to get the extra marks?
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    In our school we have to write SQuID paragraphs instead of PEEL:

    Would this format help you better ?

    Also make sure to do word level analysis (pick an individual word or phrase from your quote and describe in detail what each bit means) talk about what devices the author has used (similes, personification, sibilance etc.) and how they add effect/build tension/shows x character to be x / etc.(depending on the statement/ opening sentence)

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