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AS level English Paper 1(Passages) Question 1(Commentary) (CIE) watch

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    Hello everyone,

    My teacher says that I'm not able to think and comment on the effect created by the language and style used by the author. She also says that my thinking is "immature". I do not know how to improve on these parts. Could you please suggest something that would enhance such problems I am currently facing?

    Thank you.
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Updated: November 2, 2017
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