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What points would you include in the question :
'Religion was Elizabeth's main problem in the years 1558-1569. '. How far do you agree with this statement.
In your answer you should include :
•The religious settlement.
•Mary Queen of Scotts' arrival in England in 1568.
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Basically we have to include 5 paragraphs (this includes our Intoduction and Conclusion). And I'm struggling on how to introduce It and how to conclude it and what main points I should put in for each problem.
Can anyone plssssssss help me?????
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(Original post by Cherryblossom200)
What points would you include in the question :
'Religion was Elizabeth's main problem in the years 1558-1569. '. How far do you agree with this statement.
In your answer you should include :
•The religious settlement.
•Mary Queen of Scotts' arrival in England in 1568.
(16marks)

Basically we have to include 5 paragraphs (this includes our Intoduction and Conclusion). And I'm struggling on how to introduce It and how to conclude it and what main points I should put in for each problem.
Can anyone plssssssss help me?????
i’ve actually just done an essay on this!
it was practically the same just the topic sentence was on threat of invasion rather than religion

if you want i can send you my essay and you can have a look at how i structured it etc.

i haven’t received my mark back yet though... in the past i have got full marks but haven’t done any assessments so far in year 10

have you had any essay planning activities in class to help you with points you should include for each paragraph?

i hope i can help!
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Onggggg thankyouuuu for replying. If it is possible can you send me your easy or tell me how u structured it i don't really mind I'm just a bit confused on how to put the paragraphs in place and what to put in it
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Hi there, I have the same essay to write, do you think you can help me as well? I am really stuck . Thanks
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(Original post by Cherryblossom200)
What points would you include in the question :
'Religion was Elizabeth's main problem in the years 1558-1569. '. How far do you agree with this statement.
In your answer you should include :
•The religious settlement.
•Mary Queen of Scotts' arrival in England in 1568.
(16marks)

Basically we have to include 5 paragraphs (this includes our Intoduction and Conclusion). And I'm struggling on how to introduce It and how to conclude it and what main points I should put in for each problem.
Can anyone plssssssss help me?????
Extra point could be:
- Gender and Legitimacy
Or
- Revolt of the Northern earls (but you could put this under religion and/or Scottish threat)
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