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    I'm really struggling with the essays and we had to write an essay as a group and id appreciate if someone could help me improve my paragraph.
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    Well, if you'd like help then you'll really have to give more information than 'I need to write an essay'. What is the essay on? What level are you aiming to achieve? And how do you expect anyone to help improve your paragraph if you haven't even showed us it yet?
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    When I posted the original post it should’ve attached a link to a google document with my paragraph on with all the information that you asked for.
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    This is my paragraph. The essay is on ‘are the FRG and Nazi Germany completely different’
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