AS English language coursework Watch
You need to go Point, Evidence, Comment. Loads of times. And for each PEC, you get a tick.
The "P" is a piece of terminology, and the idea is to show how much terminology you know.
The 'comment' should tie it back to the question, or how the writing suits audience/purpose.
'There is a lot of elision, for example "don't" which shows that this is a spontaneous and casual conversation.'
'There is a lot of field-specific lexis, for example 'modem' which shows that this is suited to a computer-savvy audience.'
And you don't have to interweave your texts. Just talk about the first text in a block, then the other one. I did that and got 78/90. (72 is an A). So don't make it more difficult than it is.
I am doing my coursework as well..I am doing a travel article and a horror story and I need help too.
I hope it's of use.