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Lydz1988
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I'm being asked to explore and discuss a range of factors . Hypothetically, if I am being asked to explore and discuss factors of what influence people's choice of shop I would choose to firstly , choose my factors from material : cheaper , closer vicinity , habitual shop .for each factor , I would say WHY this is a factor ( evidence from book ) and would I outline strengths and weaknesses ? How would I be critical ? I'm confused with the process words . Can someone knowledgeable help using a hypothetical example ? How would I situate an argument ?
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If I were to write it I would say in the following way:
There are number of factors that influence people’s choice of shop one of these is closer vicinity. It can be said that location of shop is very influential factor.
......suggests “people are highly likely to chose a shop that is closer to their surroundings (Author(s), date)”. For example, we are more likely to go to a shop that is just around the corner from our house. This shows that the closer vicinity of shop do indeed influence people’s choice. However. given the fact that there are many shops on one street people may not only be influenced by closeness of vicinity. Nowadays, we have a greate choice of shop therefore it is important to take into consideration other factors one of which is price. HERE You explain previously introduced factor and do the same future ones.

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