i want to improve on my essay and i just need one more line to finish up the introduction, could you help me think of a cliff hanger for the end of the opening of my essay (Description of a haunted house.) But i am not inside yet so it has to be a cliffhanger of me still being out ... if that makes any sense :smile:

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debbie394

Original post by esmeralda123

My last sentence is, "cobwebs covered the corners of the doors, tiny black spiders threading towards their prey" and my target is toad a few lines to the end to hint of something that may happen ext :smile:

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tonedown

I did this poem for GCSE, if you want any other ideas or notes I would be happy to help :smile:

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debbie394

Original post by alextheowl

I did this poem for GCSE, if you want any other ideas or notes I would be happy to help :smile:

Thank you for the offer, but have just finished this topic :smile:

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Lit teacher

Original post by esmeralda123

"cobwebs covered the corners of the doors, tiny black spiders threading towards their prey"

I paused, hardly daring to breathe. A curtain had twitched. I was sure of it. Almost imperceptibly it had moved, so softly that it could have been a breath of wind. But the window was closed. There was no wind.