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Rebeccamay2002
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Can somebody take a look at my GCSE 9-1 Macbeth Essay for literature paper 1, im aiming for a 6 in my GCSE but often get told i dont analyse enough or something. Would be nice if people could leave good points and constructive criticism Power is explored during this extract and is referenced by Shakespeare through both the characters of Macbeth and Lady Macbeth and how they lose and gain power in different parts of the play, especially in relation to their mental states at different parts of the play.Firstly, power is explored in the extract and how Macbeth starts to lose it, for instance when Lady Macbeth tells his that he
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(Original post by Rebeccamay2002)
Can somebody take a look at my GCSE 9-1 Macbeth Essay for literature paper 1, im aiming for a 6 in my GCSE but often get told i dont analyse enough or something. Would be nice if people could leave good points and constructive criticism Power is explored during this extract and is referenced by Shakespeare through both the characters of Macbeth and Lady Macbeth and how they lose and gain power in different parts of the play, especially in relation to their mental states at different parts of the play.Firstly, power is explored in the extract and how Macbeth starts to lose it, for instance when Lady Macbeth tells his that he
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hey, here is the marked essay, hope it helps! also, hopefully you can see comments made throughout the essay!
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