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    WRITE THE END OF YOUR STORY
    Focus on using sophisticated vocabulary and descriptive detail.
    Avoid too much dialogue
    Avoid ‘and then..’ ‘so then..’
    The story is supposed to be about a child making a fire in the woods and killing a child by accident because of how much the fire has spread.
    I’m really struggling and I need this homework to be done before tomorrow
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    (Original post by cocktailbaby1911)
    WRITE THE END OF YOUR STORY
    Focus on using sophisticated vocabulary and descriptive detail.
    Avoid too much dialogue
    Avoid ‘and then..’ ‘so then..’
    The story is supposed to be about a child making a fire in the woods and killing a child by accident because of how much the fire has spread.
    I’m really struggling and I need this homework to be done before tomorrow
    Looks like I'm too late.

    Using adverbs to start sentences is a good idea I'd say for this. What you seem to be being asked to just to be interesting and different with how you tell a story.
 
 
 
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