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    so I wrote a CV for work experience applications and can someone please check it and give me some advice on how to improve it.

    It will be much-appreciated x

    *(personal information is added here)

    Skills and Qualities:

    I am a hard-working, determined and motivated Year 10 student, age 15, currently attending X. At school, I perform well as I am very keen on getting the best grades possible. I enjoy working with others and developing my leadership skills as well as being consistently organised and having an excellent record of attendance and punctuality. In the future, I intend to study A-levels and attend university in order to hopefully pursue a career in finance.*

    *

    Education:

    X

    September 2014 - July 2019

    *

    Courses being studied (GCSE):

    English Language*(predicted 8/A*)
    English*Literature(predicted 8/A*)
    Mathematics*(predicted 8/A*)*

    Chemistry*(predicted 8/A*)*
    Biology*(predicted 8/A*)

    Physics*(predicted 8/A*)

    History*(predicted 8/A*)*
    German*(predicted 8/A*)*
    Textiles*(predicted 8/A*)*

    Interests and Achievements:

    I have many hobbies such as playing the piano, reading and listening to music.*Being an eager piano player, my self-motivation and desire have led me to achieve my grade 6 piano. However, it has always been my interest to improve my social skills and gain more confidence. Also,*I am a 'guardian angel' at my school which means I provide advice and support for pupils in year 7 and volunteer to help at school.

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    (Original post by sophia_d.x1)
    so I wrote a CV for work experience applications and can someone please check it and give me some advice on how to improve it.

    It will be much-appreciated x

    *(personal information is added here)

    Skills and Qualities:

    I am a hard-working, determined and motivated Year 10 student, age 15, currently attending X. At school, I perform well as I am very keen on getting the best grades possible. I enjoy working with others and developing my leadership skills as well as being consistently organised and having an excellent record of attendance and punctuality. In the future, I intend to study A-levels and attend university in order to hopefully pursue a career in finance.*

    *

    Education:

    X

    September 2014 - July 2019

    *

    Courses being studied (GCSE):

    English Language*(predicted 8/A*)
    English*Literature(predicted 8/A*)
    Mathematics*(predicted 8/A*)*

    Chemistry*(predicted 8/A*)*
    Biology*(predicted 8/A*)

    Physics*(predicted 8/A*)

    History*(predicted 8/A*)*
    German*(predicted 8/A*)*
    Textiles*(predicted 8/A*)*

    Interests and Achievements:

    I have many hobbies such as playing the piano, reading and listening to music.*Being an eager piano player, my self-motivation and desire have led me to achieve my grade 6 piano. However, it has always been my interest to improve my social skills and gain more confidence. Also,*I am a 'guardian angel' at my school which means I provide advice and support for pupils in year 7 and volunteer to help at school.

    (X) - private information
    Is there a particular area of work experience you're applying for? That would help us give more specific feedback
 
 
 
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