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    Can someone please help me with an opening line and storyline to the
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    Write a short story using the title "The Day I Learnt a Valuable Lesson"
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    Try to start with a one-word two-word complex sentence. This will give the examiner a good impression of your writing form the start as they will see that you can use fragmented sentences...
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    No.Not again.I had never thought this would happen to me again, and the worst part is; it's all my fault.

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    Betrayal
    Trusting someone you knew you shouldn't have

    Hope that helps
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    Try to start with a one-word two-word complex sentence. This will give the examiner a good impression of your writing form the start as they will see that you can use fragmented sentences...
    E.g:
    No.Not again.I had never thought this would happen to me again, and the worst part is; it's all my fault.

    Ideas:
    Betrayal
    Trusting someone you knew you shouldn't have

    Hope that helps
    great thank you so much !!
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    (Original post by LucyJones01)
    great thank you so much !!
    you're welcome
 
 
 

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