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    I have to write a creative story for English and the theme is atmosphere. I decided to do a car crash and I need help thinking of a simile for this sentence: ‘fear and panic flooded into her like ...’ I originally had ‘like a mangled mess’ but my teacher hated it.
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    (Original post by Aoife3171)
    I have to write a creative story for English and the theme is atmosphere. I decided to do a car crash and I need help thinking of a simile for this sentence: ‘fear and panic flooded into her like ...’ I originally had ‘like a mangled mess’ but my teacher hated it.
    A bullet to her chest, ripping her soul apart.
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    Ermm like An unforgiving storm? Quite a tough one to make into a simile haha
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    A burst water main
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    Freezing grip of steely cold air numbing all her cognition
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    Fear and panic flooded into her like thick fog, suffocating her lungs and blinding her eyes
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