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    Hi, I am currently finishing off my dissertation on 'How is genetic modification of human embryos carried out?' and I am unsure of how to start/ structure my conclusion. The areas of research I have covered in my dissertation are:
    - introduction to GM
    -GM in humans
    -reasons for GM in embryos
    -embryo structure
    -principles of genes and DNA
    -The procedure (CRISPR)
    -A recent case where embryonic GM was performed in the US-Considerations and issues raised.

    If anyone has any recommendation on what to talk about / how to structure the conclusion it'd be much appreciated! Thanks.
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    (Original post by Ellie118)
    Hi, I am currently finishing off my dissertation on 'How is genetic modification of human embryos carried out?' and I am unsure of how to start/ structure my conclusion. The areas of research I have covered in my dissertation are:
    - introduction to GM
    -GM in humans
    -reasons for GM in embryos
    -embryo structure
    -principles of genes and DNA
    -The procedure (CRISPR)
    -A recent case where embryonic GM was performed in the US-Considerations and issues raised.

    If anyone has any recommendation on what to talk about / how to structure the conclusion it'd be much appreciated! Thanks.
    Did your tutor ok your essay title?
    Have they seen a draft?
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    Did your tutor ok your essay title?
    Have they seen a draft?
    yes they've seen it and think it sounds alright.
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    yes they've seen it and think it sounds alright.
    Seems a bit too much like an instruction manual to me, which means less analysis and evaluation. Not enough individual thought by you.


    I would try and put some of that n the conclusion by giving some analysis and asking important questions.

    What have you learned from the investigation , what is the state if genetic modification and what does the future look like?
 
 
 
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