GCSE English Language - Transactional Writing Speech

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Good Afternoon!

Did you know that 95% of poor people died in poverty a few months ago? Did you know that they have survived for years? Although the statistics may appear appalling, I need you people to donate money for poor people in order to avoid the brutality that has awfully caused them to remain poor till death!

Firstly, poor people don’t have anything important (such as food, drinks, houses and medicines). Ravenous and desperate, poor people continue walking through poverty to find some food everyday but nothing happens - they just become drastically slender on and on! This is the leading cause of death. Another major reason that many of these poor people die is they drink unclean, unhealthy water, rather than medicines (but they don’t have any). They cannot manage with their horrible health conditions, they have to come safely through it because they don’t have any choice though. Furthermore, poor people don’t have any houses so they have to remain outdoors feeling cold and hot (depending on weather conditions) which affects them negatively.

Imagine living in abject poverty, otherwise we will not understand how poor people have been through a lot in their life. Everyday poor people desperately want to be in denial, as the reality is too painful and brutal. They have too much negative, distressed and depressing thoughts, perhaps due to the fact that they lose their loved ones, loathe their lives and more. It is utterly unfair to poor people that we have our lives to enjoy with freedom - look at the state of them. So heartbroken.

Like a servant, poor people are being told what to do by invisible rich people. For instance rich people unsympathetically watch poor people working hard in poverty and don’t care to do anything for them. They are not aware of seeing how poor people survive. Also, rich people are quite selfish, as they do not want to donate some money for poor people just because they want to keep a lot of money with them. How ruthless are they?

In summary, we all need to show our positive love, support and dignity for poor people! I believe that donating money for poor people is such a great and impressive idea, as it might make a huge difference to their lives! This is the final push to raise the amount of £50,000 - we require 500 individuals to donate just £100 each or you can donate as little or much as you want.

Thank you for listening!