I am trying to improve my creating writing description so cany anyone mark this and give me feedback.
The picture I used was of some fireworks and people celebrating
My writing :
Dark. Cold. Silent. Walking through people silently who are waiting for the new year. Shouting and laughing people who are excited; smell of the air is fresh and smooth. Dogs are barking, children crying. Sparkling rockets fly up in the air and go boom!
Bright and tall buildings, people looking outside through there apartments. Trees glaring at what is happening. The delicious smell of food. Food is cooked for people to eat and enjoy the night. Shops selling merchandise. Decorated houses shining with bright lights on them. Clouds and stars gazing down on everything.
Walking further there are bright and tall building, inside them, there are people with excitement and people with rage. Some people are not having a good night. Windows shut, doors closed, people who don,t have anyone to celebrate new years with.
News channels in front of the bright and tall buildings recording and reporting everything for the whole world to watch. Tourists coming to this place to celebrate the new years. After a while, everyone calms down and there is peace and silent.
Dogs are feeling cold and restless from all the standing. Barking loudly to express their emotions of joy but no one cares. Dogs are like stones to everyone, unnoticed material. Grains of sand on the floor. Wind accelerating at the speed of light past people.
The newspaper being handed out early, the headline says: grandparents killed their own children, peoples nigh ruined by reading this headline. Who would do such a thing!
This place is really dark, cold and silent.