Talk to your tutor about your work and see your lecturers with past work. I've noticed and had confirmed that's there's also a little trick (i'm also school of social sciences 2nd year who travels an hour for uni- not a parent though and I can understand why that takes a lot of your attention) with regards to your citations and references. People seem to forget that this is a massive part of your work and it's really easy to move your work into a first just by fixing your references. So a little tip is- Do not touch a textbook, I mean at all. Using a textbook pretty much automatically places you into a 2:1. Opt for a wide range of journal articles and original texts and only if necessary use 10% websites and news outlets for things like figures or quotes. When citing work, only cite the same source a maximum of two times, otherwise it appears that you aren't studying a variety of sources and are in a sense copying a source. Also, try and use words from the question as much as possible in your work as this will keep you on track with your discussion. When writing your work try and make it as analytical as possible- indeed, the sky is blue. We know that because the sky is blue. Furthermore, the grass is green, we know that because the grass is green- if you catch my drift- and applying the words from the question in your work will help to frame your arguments, keep the discussion flowing, and keep the work analytical.
You are smart, you wouldn't be in university if you weren't (and that's not to say people who choose not to study higher education aren't smart), it's just perhaps the way you are approaching your work might need a few tweaks.