Giving a free laptop

Id do
1 intro
2 language of both
3 structures of both
4 brief context of both
4.5 another language if you have time
5 conclusion

In 45 mins :-/

How many paragraphs and do they have to be detailed

5/6 including the intro and conclusion.

Oh and for the actual thing I learnt some poems off by heart. The ones I found most important to learn I will list in order of importance (I've taken easiness to learn into account)
1 storm on the Island
2 remains
3 ozymandias
4 london
5 charge of the light brigade
6 bayonet OR exposure OR kamikaze

The rest you can just quote

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=ZqeLpX_xqCE
This is my essay if you could have a look at grade it?

At least a 7 but I'm not exactly sure of what the grade boundries would be, could be an 8 even.

Any improvements

Context! If you did some and I missed it I'm sorry but it's 2am and everything is in slowed motion 😂

I ended up with an 8 in the end, probably could have got a 9 but I left revision for the night before oops. I think the key for me was to just make lots of points, they were consise but meaningful. Pull out contrasts and similarities in the rythmns of the poems, underlying tones/meanings, liguistical features etc. Being the idiot that I am and leaving the revision so late meant that I could only really revise a couple of poems. I just remembered about 10 quotes from 2 or 3 poems and was able to compare them to the poems given in the exam with ease.

Good luck