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Can someone please give me some advice on how to improve my contemporary poem? And please give a mark out of 30. Thanks.
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I rate that 6/9 :sexface:
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I rate that 6/9 :sexface:
It’s out of 30 😂😂
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It’s out of 30 😂😂
In which case I give it 69%
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In which case I give it 69%
😂😂 this isn’t helpful 😂😂 I guess 20/30 it’s an A!!
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😂😂 this isn’t helpful 😂😂 I guess 20/30 it’s an A!!
A for Alchemistress 🤪
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A for Alchemistress 🤪
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B. Nice analysis but maybe add some empahsis to other poetic devices.
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B. Nice analysis but maybe add some empahsis to other poetic devices.
Thanks 😊😊😊
What mark would you give out of 30?
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Thanks 😊😊😊
What mark would you give out of 30?
19 - 20 /30.
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B. Nice analysis but maybe add some empahsis to other poetic devices.
You gave her a B but you really wanted to give her the D :sexface:
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You gave her a B but you really wanted to give her the D :sexface:
Never gonna live this down aren't I. Sometimes, you have to face facts. Never dwell on the past so I've moved on.
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19 - 20 /30.
Thanks, I feel as if I lacked AO2 though. I didn’t show consistency in the analysis 😂😂
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Never gonna live this down aren't I. Sometimes, you have to face facts. Never dwell on the past so I've moved on.
😂😂 he is going to troll you hard, but just tell me. I will tell him off. 😂 don’t worry about it.
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😂😂 he is going to troll you hard, but just tell me. I will tell him off. 😂 don’t worry about it.
Let him try. But he hasn't got the guts to confess to someone without PMs.
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Let him try. But he hasn't got the guts to confess to someone without PMs.
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