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Reply 40
Horrid, horrid questions. Workers and peasants and with a named leader which mucked up my structure. Hate turning point essays so missed that one out. The motivation for reform one was ok, although I struggled to find other motives for industrialisation than catching up with the West, so had to use other examples of reforms to argue against the proposition.
To the person up there who posted their revision notes... THANK YOU SO MUCHHHHH!!
Reply 42
Original post by Sachlee

Original post by Sachlee
right so i havent finished it completely,but i thought i'd put it up here for anybody to look at so far,and perhaps fill in the rest themselves if they got into it?


Thank you
Original post by Sachlee
right so i havent finished it completely,but i thought i'd put it up here for anybody to look at so far,and perhaps fill in the rest themselves if they got into it?


Thank you so much for this. I'm really stressing out and I know its been a few years now but this helps me to get some structure as to how to revise for this exam. Thank you!!!
Reply 44
Original post by Charlurr
Questioonnnn. Have you lotbeen taught that each paragraph should be a 'criterion' eg in oppression 1 - political control, 2 - civil rights, 3 - methodology of oppression etc or do you do a paragraph per leader?

Im starting to wonder about the quality of teaching at my college, considering the only person who got an A in January said they completely disregarded what our tutors said haha.

Im well scared..


should be all done as a synoptic essay (so each section is a theme being compared and contrasted across the whole period), don't worry they're teaching it right :smile:
Reply 45
Can anyone give me any tips, my problem is I know all the stuff but im useless at writing the essay. Im so used to writing everything I know that this essay stumps me and I need at least a B
Any notes/example essays would be seriously appreciated, also does anyone know what I can afford to get in this exam if I got high Bs in the other modules and coursework and still get a B over all
Im getting worried :frown: