difference between an A and an A* history essay?Watch
(doing edexcel i believe)
Sorry can't help you, got an A* at GCSE but im doing edexcel too and I'm on a B, in my defence my teachers are shite. x
which bits of history are you doing! (: -im really enjoying mine
"the emancipation of the serfs was the main cause for economic change in the years 1861-94"
think about the assumptions in the question. it's not just a basic economy question
-was there actually economic change in these years (there doesn't have to be). was is positive or negative?
- was the economic growth actually significant in the overall picture
- is there actually a strong enough correlation between emancipation and economic growth to agree with this question, be sure to answer the question!! it's asking you to look at economic change from the perspective of emancipation, so you should be constantly linking back to that
the most important things are making sure you cover the whole scope of what the question is asking you, that you're coming to a substantiated judgement (mini conclusions at the end of each para) with prioritised points (most important factors), and that you cover the whole time period from start to end, not just one part, and think about key turning points and change and continuity. think about your paras as arguments or points, not "themes", as these can be a bit too basic
hope this helps!!