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Does this make sense for a personal statement opening for psychology?

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Sounds pretty crappy.
Hi,
You shouldn't post any of your personal statement online as it will may get picked up by a plagiarism checker. Please be careful when posting sentences of your personal statement online. :smile:
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Original post by dionneophelia
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When I've giving my personal statement to my psychology teachers, one said nothing while the other said it didn't make sense.
I previously hadn't questioned it and neither had my friends, wanted some outside opinions please :smile:)


Please do not post any part of your personal statement publicly on the internet. It may get picked up by UCAS's antiplagiarism software

https://www.ucas.com/undergraduate/applying-university/filling-your-application/fraud-and-similarity.

I'm afraid you now can't use this in your actual PS.
Is that all you have for your statement?

It doesn't really make sense, your statement should be about you, not a question.

I used this for mine and it helped
https://www.which.co.uk/tools/personal-statement-builder/
WHY do you want to study this subject instead of anything else?
A good way to begin is to explain the moment you realised this - ie. a topic in another A Level, an exhibition you saw, a piece on the news etc.

Start with that.
Original post by returnmigrant
WHY do you want to study this subject instead of anything else?
A good way to begin is to explain the moment you realised this - ie. a topic in another A Level, an exhibition you saw, a piece on the news etc.

Start with that.

I agree, saying why you want to study the subject and how you are suited to study psychology is what you need to focus on in your personal statement.

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