Can anybody help grade my paragraph and give me some improvements to makeWatch
Also I’d suggest talking about structure in either this paragraph or a different one as that’s a very important aspect that a lot of people seem to miss
Hope that’s helpful
I’m not sure what the question you’re answering is and I’m sure you’re doing fine, but just in case make sure you link back to it so that it’s clear you understand what you’re being asked
The question was:
Compare the ways poets present ideas about power in Ozymandias and in one other poem from ‘Power and conflict’.