Personal Statements best-worstWatch
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Just a reminder - do not post your UCAS statement online/share it with others until the end of your UCAS cycle e.g. end of Oct 2019 if you applied for 2019/2020 entry.
That's the worst one I've seen so far.
I think the best one I've seen was from one of my friends applying for medicine. She got an interview at Cambridge
Its called studential